Well, this isn't your worst movie. It's not your best.
I like that this movie very well puts some thought into the horrific pain of love shattering. It really does feel as horrific and painful as this movie and how the movie puts it.
However... the animation was and the random things that occurred in the movie with this story, doesn't really make things better. In fact, it doesn't seem like one experiences a break-up like that typically in real life, there is usually logic around things, as poor and heartless and cruel as it is.
While putting things in a fantasy world of creatures and the like does supposedly make things better for some stories, videos, and etc, it fails immensely here.
I'm hoping your videos don't wind up being shit. I hope you don't place mindless gore, potty humor, sex, and other garbage, without reason, like other imbeciles on the web here at Newgrounds. Your obviously capable of doing better. Just... this is only improving and good enough to convince me that you have a place here outside dumping your worst quality animations for shits and giggles.