Not your best work, considering the person's voice narrating everything seemed quite uninterested, let alone believing, anything said by him. Shouldn't he care? Plus the puns, while humorous, were complemented with such far out garbage, that it wasn't funny enough to make up for the not funny garbage.
Maybe if you used a voice actor that was better for this, or if you sounded more believable, this would get 4 * minimum all reviews. Also, maybe you could use more believable crazy stuff to tie towards the video, instead of things that are unbelievable, it would make sense in a crazy way, and be just as funny if not more so.
This could have easily been one of your best flashes to date, but you needed to use the most pathetic voice, storyline, and puns, to put it out. I don't mind if something takes you a month to make if its a really high quality flash. So long as it makes me laugh so hard I'll remember it forever, and recommend it to my friends, its all that matters.