VinnitoElito's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fallout Adventure Time]

Impressive, I'd never think these two things would go along so well...

deathink responds:

Yeah the fit so well.

[Bandits to Tor: 029]

By far and large this is only one of two comics in this comic series in which a question mark appears above my head and will never be replaced with a face-palm. This will confuse me and never will I have an intermediate or direct answer without numerous additional screens added or without a commentary from the comic's creator(s). Hopefully this flaw doesn't pop up a third time. Confusion that cannot by answered from the viewers'(readers') side of things is not beneficial to a story, unless a story later explains what the heck happened, and then it only reduces the damage done to the story.

Tanadrine-Studios responds:

Looks like I'm going to have to do my research on putting action panels together based on the responses so far. I greatly appreciate the honest feedback and I'm going to work to get it right.

[The Rotten Egg]

This is a different way of putting this joke than one would expect...
and it's quite hilarious!

WaldFlieger responds:

Thanks! :)

[intergalactic spy]

This is pretty good. You made it very fast, which is probably why this could be a little better (it seems like most of the focus was on the head and special effects). I'm hoping maybe you not only put great effort in again, but you also put more time, you would have made a masterpiece if the body of this being was not so bland and plain (you worked on everything but the body...).

FarturAst responds:

The quest was to do this topic under 30 minutes ;)

When i am rendering for jobs i also put a lot of more work and time into my paintings ;)

[Bandits to Tor: 025]

A very unique turn of events... but... if Swami doesn't die... does that mean those Brakians don't die?
Also, apparently this can have a major turn of events on the comic... though not as much on the series as a whole. I'm wondering how it will turn out.

Tanadrine-Studios responds:

She's pretty dead. I can tell you that! No one survives a point-blank shot from Dodger's trusty sidearm.

I do think that there is an element of confusion going through Swami right now though. Silly teenagers... they don't know nuthin!

There's also the fact that Brakkians have radically different beliefs... death isn't such a bad thing in their eyes. In her perspective, she was helping him by ending his life.

[Robotic Nightmare]

I must admit, I do like this alot! However, the background with the sky doesn't look right, instead of looking like any form or sort of sky, clouds, or pullution, it looks more like blurs of color and little else. The background structures are also simply done, they are merely colored silhouttes. That and the machine-beast uses many of the same rusty colors over and over with little variation other than shading, even though it is implied as rusty, and rust is differently colored for different metals.

Oh but my nit-picking does not change that this is still incredible and well done!

deathink responds:

Thanks man, I am glad you like it!

[Super Metallix]

This is very nice. He looks a bit different, like he changed shape slightly. Well, regardless, this is still awesome.

<deleted> responds:

Yeah, he changes shape in his super form. It's supposed to be that way.

[Sex Hair]

Chest hair is indeed the true sex hair of a man. This adequately portrays chest hair as an attractive feature. A little more detail on the chest hair and clothes could have been nice though (chest hair is zigzags, clothes have no detail with buttons or zipper/buttons on pants).

WooleyWorld responds:

Well I mean... at least you liked it. :p

[Helpful Joe]

This is very nice, but it seems like you could have done a bit more on the clothing he wears. It seems most of the work on Joe's body was on the mask and sleeves, and not his torso, or shoulders, and while I can understand the dust(steam or smoke?) could be responsible for obscuring the legs, work could possible be done there too. This is still very good though.

shammiemaa responds:

Thanks. I painted the body a bit loose to point viewer attention more to the face area where I painted some nice details. Also it looks more alive that way (at least to me ;P), but it depends on what you like ;) I guess

[sorcerer's dragon]

I love Dragons! And magic! I noticed you actually did work adding a scaled texture to the dragon, something so small, but so important! I only wish the sorcerer's face was visible...

shammiemaa responds:

Yah I used some scales from monitor lizard ;) thanks